This one would be a 3. There were a few innacuracies in your Topic Development and a few things left undeveloped fully.
1) You don't need to say, "Geography" at the beginning. Also, geography is not "the ability to read a map."
2) When you are talking about the globe, you mentioned that it was measured by a ruler. This was not true as it was measured by a string (pretty hard to use a ruler to measure distance on a globe :) 3)Also, you mentioned that, "airplanes follow the curvature." This is not enough information. You should say, "airplanes follow the curvature of the earth which means they travel a shorter distance in real life than they what is measured on the globe." Danny, never assume the listener knows anything about the topic you are speaking on. In this case, maybe you are assuming the listener (rater) has heard the topic. Maybe he has, but you must imagine that the person you are speaking to doesn't know anything about the lecture and you are responsible for explaining the whole thing.
Overall, nice work again! You have a very natural speaking voice! :)
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This one would be a 3. There were a few innacuracies in your Topic Development and a few things left undeveloped fully.
1) You don't need to say, "Geography" at the beginning. Also, geography is not "the ability to read a map."
2) When you are talking about the globe, you mentioned that it was measured by a ruler. This was not true as it was measured by a string (pretty hard to use a ruler to measure distance on a globe :)
3)Also, you mentioned that, "airplanes follow the curvature." This is not enough information. You should say, "airplanes follow the curvature of the earth which means they travel a shorter distance in real life than they what is measured on the globe." Danny, never assume the listener knows anything about the topic you are speaking on. In this case, maybe you are assuming the listener (rater) has heard the topic. Maybe he has, but you must imagine that the person you are speaking to doesn't know anything about the lecture and you are responsible for explaining the whole thing.
Overall, nice work again! You have a very natural speaking voice! :)
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