Q4 Buyer's remorse. Danny, this is a nice response. I would give you a score of 3. If you want a 4, you would need to clean up a few grammar issues.
1) "...feeling of a deep regret" Change this to, " a feeling of deep regret." (take out 'a')
2) "...professor applies that he regrets the purchase of a car..." Change this to "...professor states that he regrets the purchase of a car..."
3) "...he felt really happy and great of his car later..." Change this to, "...he felt really happy about the purchase of his car..."
4)"...he told to the dealer..." Change this to, "...he spoke with the dealer..."
5) "...the common thing to people who bought great things for them." Change this to, "This type of thing is common for people who have bought expensive things for themselves."
Your delivery sounds good as does your topic development. Just need some work on your language use. Nice job!
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Q4 Buyer's remorse. Danny, this is a nice response. I would give you a score of 3. If you want a 4, you would need to clean up a few grammar issues.
1) "...feeling of a deep regret" Change this to, " a feeling of deep regret." (take out 'a')
2) "...professor applies that he regrets the purchase of a car..." Change this to "...professor states that he regrets the purchase of a car..."
3) "...he felt really happy and great of his car later..." Change this to, "...he felt really happy about the purchase of his car..."
4)"...he told to the dealer..." Change this to, "...he spoke with the dealer..."
5) "...the common thing to people who bought great things for them." Change this to, "This type of thing is common for people who have bought expensive things for themselves."
Your delivery sounds good as does your topic development. Just need some work on your language use. Nice job!
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